Ah, I'm enjoying this story so far. It's been a while since I've read a BOF fic, especially a good one. There's so many crossovers and fics set in an original universe it's hard to find anything good. (Though I'm not saying all of those are bad...) BOF 4 fics seem to be especially rare though, Fou-Lu's such an awesome character it's really suprising there aren't more stories about him. The last one I read with him had to be A Past Rewritten, and that was ages ago! (Have you read that one? The author abandoned it, but it was very good)

But anyway... I'm really likin' it! It's quite cute how clueless Fou-Lu was in chapter one, he was so adorable. :) Is there gonna be any more on where Fou-Lu's name came from, judging from his master's response it sounded as though he'd chosen it for a reason. Update soon, kay?

Lin: Well...Hahahaha!! This is a pretty cool story!

Kay: Will you keep quiet for once? Dear me, why did I have to suffer this kind of life?

Lin: Kay, you're overreacting. Anyway...This is so awesome! You know I started playing the game last week and thought that Fou-lu was awesome!

Kay: Mostly because he was very strong than the main character

Lin: Hey! I didn't say that!

Kay: Did I even say you did?

Lin: Haha, very funny. But you were the one who squeeled while saying something like 'OMG! He is so CUTE!' or whatever.

Kay: Excuse me for being a girl!

Lin: Whatever, where was I? Oh yeah! I totally love this fic, kind'a new perspective for me on Fou-lu but a pretty good one. Keep it up!

Kay: yes, I must say it is quite good, though I only see Lin playing the game. It is a pretty good story.

Lin: again, keep it up!! =)

YES! An update, no offense I was beginning to think you may have died. :( I'm not one to talk though. XD Another amazing chapter, and the language was still great in my opinion. I noticed little if any grammar mistakes, which makes me happy. As for the Wu Zhao question, The Wu Zhao that I thought of was the only woman in history to be called an Emperor(Empress I suppose), and I believe she was Chinese, atleast that was the Wu Zhao that I know of. Well, I can't wait until the next Chapter. ^^ ~Elixir9

Great fic! I just love it!

Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter. I really find this similar to an anime alright. But the language for Fou-Lu is fluid. (Teach me that...)

Must say, this sounded like some place from Dynasty Warriors...hehehe...or is it?

Anyways, thanks for the Fou-Lu fic. That gave me an idea for a fic with him in it. This goes to the alert favorite list.

Awesome. Simply, awesome. Heheh dreck. I love that word. I also think that I know the reference to the name, not sure if you want it in the review or it sent to you in a message, so yeah. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^ ~Elixir9

I liked it. Well done.

As far as it seems, it's really, really good. Keep on the hard work!
I can not wait until the next chapter is up!
Good luck.

Wow..the best yet..poor Fou-lu...I give you a 9.5/10.:)

Yay! Updates make Elixir a happy girl! Another wonderful chapter. XD I can't wait to see where this goes next.

cool.

Oh, I like this, I like this very much already :3 (And not just because I happen to be a bit of a very underappreciated God-Emperor, either. :3 It's rare that there's that much BOF fanfic to begin with, much less *well written* BOF fanfic.)

I, for one, actually *appreciate* Fou-lu being quite innocent in the beginning--it's not like he's going to know about humanity straightaway, now, is he? :D

At any rate, I'm quite impressed so far, and looking forward to future chapters.

Yes, I'm not usually the sharpest tool in the shed when it comes to picking up on stuff like that. Anyway, another awesome chapter. I like the last line.^^ I really didn't see any mistakes this time around. I really like where this ended. ^^ ~Elixir9

Whoo hoo a BoFIV fic! I love Fou-lu. This fic is awesome...I know I shouldn't have been caught off guard by the lack of clothing...but I still wasn't expecting it. You are really really good at the old English(I think that's what it's called.) style of dialogue. A few grammatical errors, nothing serious. Very very good job. I look forward to the next chapter. ~Elixir9