This doesn't look rightly . . . bad . . . and it's got good grammar and spelling from what I've read . . . but unfortunately I've read enough HGSS like this to recognize that when I see the figurative language 'chocolate eyes' describing Hermione's, there can't be that much originality to it.

Sorry, but there it is. Maybe I'm too early to quit reading, but as a veteran of the Snappish genre, this just seems a little too much like any other story. Keep writing, though, for you've got potential.

This story is definitly getting very interesting. I like that we get to see Hermione's thoughts for a few chapters and I loved the wedding chapter, very well written! Can't wait for the update.

Recently discovered this story, it's quite good - you write really well :] I especially liked the wedding chapter, nicely done.

Newest chapter is pretty different in terms of pace to the others I thought. I liked that Hermione reflected on Remus at the end there... are we going to see an encounter between them anytime soon? Could be interesting ;P

But yeah, nice work, and can't wait for the next update ^^

interesting

Hi there. I like this story, very very fun.

just a quick note, nothing to do with the story... Melissa O'Neil won Canadian Idol in 2005, the third season, she wasn't the runner up.

remus was a bit OOC there... but its a good plot

Poor Hermoine, all torn up! How could she have thought that marrying Remus would help cure her of her love for Severus? And now that he knows, what is he going to do about it?

Good job, keep updating!

it turend black b/c remus is going to die if he drinks the potion that hermione is makeing for him...lol i don't know that's just a guess that's most likely wrong, but what the hell, it's a guess. i'll just find out for sure in the nexed few chaps.

AW!! You CAN'T just leave it! Update!! I HAVE to know how he does it!!

great update! i really loved it. can't wait for the next chapter! ^__^

Woa 0.o man ¬¬ is he blind? ...and stupid?
Great chapter, plz update soon

good

i really like this story! great job! i can't wait for the next update ^__^

PLEASE UPDATE! HERMIONE AND SEVERUS ARE THE BEST PAIR EVER!