aw. this has to be my fave couple in slayers! except for gourry and lina but yea. i liked this story and it was really well writen it kinda suck that they couldn't be together but oh well. anywhos peace love and happines! love tayla! peace out! *peace sign*

Aw...they are so kawaii!

Oh, I loved it. One of the best I have seen in a long time. Well done, even with a few minor spelling errors. Xel/Filia is one of my favorite couplings. Bravo.

Okay, there were a few grammatical errors here and there. I liked your use of Japanese words at the right places ("miko" is a more accurate expression than "priestess"). But shouldn't Xelloss have been affected by close proximity to someone feeling strong positive emotions? Remember what happens when one is kind to one's enemies. . .

That was very humourous. WIll there be any sequels to this, as it seems that there are still so many reactions and ramifications to this that could still be looked at.

Nice story, (was this inspired by another story? I remember to have read a familiar story... *shrugs*)
but the mind readng thing... hmm I think Xellos isn't a Telepath but okay it fits in this story.
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ha! That was so cute! This is the first FX I ever read and I loved it. keep up the good work.