 Gwen Luthael 2006-12-06 . chapter 3*gasps* 107 words? we're all ashamed of you... anyways, just wanted to say that i really like your stuff... especially, acutally the last one. i like the last line too. dunno really why. i cant think of any constructive criticism right now.. so ill just stop before i make a fool of myself.
-Gwen |
 blackmonday 2006-11-25 . chapter 2You and your psychological ways... Yeah, I do the pretending there actually is a theme thing too sometimes (especially for my english class!). I haven't seen that many fics (or at least I haven't searched that hard) for The original Revolution ending Frond's era. IT would be interesting if someone would do a first person biography on Frond, the traitors, and the subjects on that time. Once again, great job! |
 Dim Aldebaran 2006-09-17 . chapter 2*grin* The "fad" of drabble archives. Love the diction, there. XD
In any case, no real concrit. Maybe later, if you prod me. I'm a bit on-end right now. So. *coughs* In any case, I preferred Red Shift out of the two current ones, mostly because it was a bit more subtle about stuff, and the second one... I dunno, the parallelisms were a bit too blunt for my taste. So. *coughs*
In any case, I wouldn't repost those other lovely drabbles into here. I'd just slap the new ones in here. :P There's my take on the matter, anyway. |