Great

I guess I didn't review your other chapters. At least not this one. This is a great story! I like it!

Sincerely,
AshK

It's a good story the way it is! I like it! I guess if you want to you can just replace the chapters! That's up to you however! I like the story the way it is!

Sincerely,
AshK

Excellent update! I like it! Did I review your other chapters or not! If I didn't I have to say that this is a great story!


Sincerely,
AshK

You should probably take the story down and improve it, and think about changing the names of your original characters, Umi (which means sea, fitting name ^^) is actually a real girl name, but I've never seen it used as a surname before. Denko sounds more like a girls name (and one possible meaning is 'electric child' but I guess that was intentional ^_^). Junsui is, I think, a boy first name, but I guess it could be a surname too, and Kagayaki sounds like a surname. I could be wrong, though.

I like the story, but there is alwas room for improvement. Keep up the good work.

I love how Kagayaki used the clock to almost neuter Kuno while saying Junsui is his girl!

A nice read.

[quote] Aparently our favorite couple have simular powers but they don't even know it.[/quote]
I didn't know Genma and Soun were a couple.

Excellent story so far! Just update when you can!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good chapter! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good job! Ranma and Akane forever!

Sincerely,
AshK

Good start! I like it so far! I thought it was on the site before. I didn't realize it was removed. Anyway thanks for reposting it! Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
AshK

WTF?!? I've seen this story before! I'm having trouble remembering the name, but I've read this story before on

Considering that the publish date of this copy is today, I'd say you stole it from the real author

Well, this is interesting. I'd be nice to see the first part of your Manga series though.

Good luck, this seems to have much potential.