this story was really good...keep up the good work!

UPDATE! What are you talking about? Ronny rox! [smirks] GREAT JOBB! The chaps too short though! Its should be 10 pgs Myth ;_; Lol damn you MACFEE!

Macfee:I have feelings ya know!

n-nard:Suree you do...and Neji's a ballerina...

[Neji appears in the hallway in a tutu]

Neji:Ha ha...wrong place -runs away-

n-nard:Okay that was WEIRDD!

Macfee:I have to agree with you...

Ron:BLOODY HELL!

n-nard:YEAH, UPDATE! OR I SHALL STALK YOU!

Love n-nard

P.S. You spelt criticsm wrong XD;...you need a beat? I can be a beta for you, dear )

whoa, onegai update soon!

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Taij

ouu great start! ] mee likin it!

cute story! update soon!

:D