no!

ugh. i want more.

very nice.

kinda slow.

but it keeps me interested enough to wonder what'll happen next.

i wasn't expecting that at all lol

i love all the shady business going on.

it feels like some kind of gang war.

i like it.

wow. u write really well.

very discriptive.

excellent visuals.

can't wait to read more :D

neat! keep up the good ork, you've got an interesting setup here.

This is my best new find in weeks! Nicely set up AU with good details and believable (which is rare, unfortunatly). On top of that it's got my favorites, Roxas, Axel, Riku, and Sora ) Everyone's pretty IC (also rare, considering the variety of creative personalities often tagged on Cloud), and well, frankly I'm surprised at the low number of reviews, for such a nice story!

Hope to see you update soon.

You've got me hooked. Great story. Update soon hun.

Interesting, I like it. Can't wait for the hent update, so see you soon!

e! i'm so excited. i really hope that the target will be sora, and they'll have a forbidden love, like in romeo & juliet or something (where they don't die at the end, of course). can't wait for what you'll write next! i love action/fantasy stuff! :)

Oh my god! This story is so suspenseful, when are you going to write more? I can't wait to read the next chaper! _ Keep at it!

OH NOES! What's his name? WHATS HIS NAME?

I won't rest until I find out.

*stalks Tala til next chapter*

you are TOO good / D: / i know i'm always anticipating any updates from you because you own my Author Alert list / XD / i can already tell this fiction's going to be one of the best / ] /

ok, u caught my attention with ur ch1. where's ch2? and 3? and 4? and 5? keep writting XD

I loved the way you write! I can't wait until the next chapter! :D

Oh! I likey! _ Can't wait for the next update! Make it soon!