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I am... Speechless! The way this is written is mind blowing! I can honestly say you made me cry, really! I had tears brimming, my breath was hitching, I felt sympathy for Prowler and I just... I just can't put into words how this made me feel! The bit that got me was where Prowler couldn't move all the way to him passing out...

Once again, a well-written fic, this is just... amazing...

Good story

How on Earth does this only have 17 reviews?

This was a fantastic story - not mary-sue/fangirl or anything of the sort.

It was extremely well written, and even had me tearing up in more than a few places...

I'd personally love to see (read) a sequel concerning these two... hint hint ;)

Oh and just for the record, I don't think prequels are needed to explain any element to the story - everything was pretty well connected.

Krypt

(Wow! That has to be the longest review I've EVER written! :D )

You had me crying through the accident flashback... oh, man...

uhh... well, there are always late persons like me to discover classic works here...

I was stunned while reading this story. I couldn't leave my chair till finished. So much about your talent. I don't like OCs, I do love Prowl, so it is quite me-not-like when he's paired with fangirls/OCs even it is a right of every sentinent fans... the reason I write this comment is that you twisted my heart by this story, it is something to remember, this is something which would merge to the personality of Prowl I formed in myself...

(The ever present ... (dots) symbolizing my wondering state of mind.) :)

Wow, thats all I can say. It was beautiful, and I couldn't stop reading, and for the firsst time in reading these kinds of thins, I actually nearly cried at a unknown/barely known character's death. Te ending, well the whole thing was well... wow.

Favorited.

thanks always looking for a good fic with Prowl in it

I had trouble finding words to express how very much this story meant to me, but I think I can capture the feeling best simply by saying this: I am very glad it was written. Thank you.

aww... sad and sweet at the same time.

Such a beautiful, touching fic... You really did a great job with Prowl's character, here... delving into his psyche and showing that he's *not* just a cool, logic-driven mech, but can and *does* feel. Your OC was great, too... (thankfully not slipping at all into the dreaded 'Mary Sue' realm...). This was a very sweet and tender fic. :3 Great job. :D

...one can only imagine how *Sunfall'll* feel, a couple years down the road... T_T ::sniffles:: (unless you find a way to avoid that...! Plothole, or something...? ::crosses fingers?::)

I'm with Themis on Prowl; how a mech this hot can be neglected and ignored is totally beyond me. Thankfully however, there are fics like this one to set the record straight. :)

Sweet. )

Read this on your site, but was pleased to find it here, so I might as well review, since I don't think you get all the huge heaps of praise you deserve,

This story of loss and guilt works well for many a Transformer, and Prowl, fortunately, is one of them. A very well-written and sculpted tale. It doesn't really matter if you're a Transfan, and whether or not you like G1 (though if you know about the show's 'superweapons of the week' this will work better..), it's still an excellent story.

Friday night, nothing to do, and my own writing juices aren't flowing quite as well as I'd like. So I figure I'll read up on some Nightwind, since she's a far better author than I. Mwah.

I was first wary of the 'Prowl Fangirl!' disclaimer, but I read on, and was indeed pleased. To tell the truth, I have a tendency to personally overlook Prowl in favor of more 'Rugged' TFs like Hound or Grimlock. However, this little story has indeed added a certain depth to the character that makes him appealing and whatnot- Just the same as you did with the 'stars' of other character-centered stories. though I think the more logical facet of the character might've been played up a little more.

All and all, a good fic- let's see you write something on Hound already! :)

Wow, that was beautiful. Next to Ratchet and Jazz, I've always loved Prowl. Keep up this excellent writting ! You've got amazing talent.