Wonderfully, beautifully done.

This reminds me of your Maedhros-on-Thangorodrim poem. For praise, see that review. ;)

Cheers,

Greensleeves

I admit I am not very fond of prose poems, but this is a nice one- it makes you think. The one thing that sort of bothered me was that the title played right into the poem; it looks odd.

*sigh* This is gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. The idea that part of Feanor actually went into the Silmarils is a great twist on their near-sentience.

By the way - since you like experimental writing, have you read anything of Philosopher At Large's? She hasn't posted in years, but her fics are like . . . verbal gymnastics. It might be your kind of thing.

wow... how do you *always* write so beautifully?

WOW! So much depth and power and emotion in those jewels. No wonder they drove the owners mad and made others lust for them, considering all that went into them.

Nicely done to both you and Feanor.

Wonderful, wonderful imagery! Perfect use of language! Wonderful work! I am praising you with exclamation marks!

Lovely, lovely, lovely, what else can I say?