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| ferryboat George 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseVery bittersweet. It would be very odd for Teyla not to have been married. |
| kyuuketsukirui 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseNice. :) |
| lilyoftheval5 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI just love Teyla's musing. And this was a nice combination - sleepless nights, post-Epiphany, friendship, kids... Thank You. |
| Trishkafibble 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseSweet. ^^ |
| CharmedAli 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abusethat's really well written I enjoyed it and gets a bit of brightness at the end it's very well written |
| moms2398 2006-12-29 ch 1, | abuseWhat an incredibly awesome story! So quiet and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful tale. MA |
| b7-kerravon 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet! |
| Hromiko 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice fic. :) I have noticed no one is married on the show, but I hadn't really processed the wrongness of that for Teyla in particular. I mean the people from Earth wouldn't be coming if they had other responsibilities, they weren't expecting to ever go home, Ronon was on the run for 7 years, plus his planet was destroyed, not likely to leave family for him, but Teyla was living with a sort of tribal people where people are getting killed all the time, here on Earth that's a recipe for gaggles of kids. :) I think it's very believable that she would kind of be in perpetual mourning and decide never to marry again, but it'd be awesome if they'd bring back a significant other for her, someone lost in confusion over the years. Why doesn't she get any love interests come to think of it? I think there's only been Lucius and he hardly counts. :) Also, I love the idea that John has a now grown son out there somewhere, he should totally show up on the Daedelus sometime, a mini-me stubborn troublemaker that everyone can see is just like John but neither of them notice and don't make the connection because of changed names and never being told. :D I liked the looks into how both of them spent their sleepless nights, and the idea that Rodney is really more aware of his team than he ever seems to show. I'm not sure I believe he's actually aware though. :) Has he ever done anything sensitive for anyone on the show? Telling Carson about his unspoken bond with Ronan wasn't exactly convincing. :) Poor John I kind of forget about his 6 months of feeling abandoned and how that might make him act when he first got back to Atlantis. Well this was a nicely written fic, believable backgrounds, good bits of character, all around great. Keep on writing! |
| Leesa Perrie 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseA nice little story about friendship. I like the way it's written, and the idea of secret pasts for Teyla and John. Rodney's arrival at the end is very good - and well handled. |
| jtjaforever 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. Very insightful and touching. |
| AlbinoMonkeyC 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abusecute! |
| ChiaraHhue 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAs with all your stories, this one is not only well written but thoughtful as well. And I enjoyed learning more about Teyla by having this story from her POV. I also liked that you had John feel comfortable enough with their friendship to share his regrets yet had Teyla feel comfortable enough to keep her special heartache to herself - that was very well done and perfectly in character for them both. I also loved that you had Rodney "drop in" at the end. It was the perfect way for Teyla to realize that in his own way Rodney is also very caring about his family of friends. Thanks for writing. |
| Aurelia30 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! The more I watch SGA, and the more stories I read, the more I consider Sheppard and his team to be like family. And I add Elizabeth and Carson into that, and Zelenka, too. |
| Camy 2006-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you for sharing...this is beautiful! |
| spiritedchihiro 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abusewow...i loved it! really thought u captured teyla and john exceptionally well! glad to read teyla stories! |