This poem and your other one "what has happened to me" makes. Me think of Judai and Asuka

this is some of the best poetry i've ever read; great job. thanx for the paste-in thing, btw; i put it in my profile.

Nice. I have some poems up, please check 'em out.

Wow is right... you know as i read the frist few lines all I though was 'this so applies to Joey' I don't know why it just happened. awesome job. I have a poem but no one read it lol Keep it up.