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Reviews For: Mitigating Factors

The Swordsman
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this; it provides depth to Wilson's character...why he lied to House about the patient... you've done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work!

The Swordsman
IceStar4621
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting insight into our beloved Wilson! *snicker* And he says he's the well adjusted one!

I liked how the paragraphs were broken up with the repeated line of "I don't know why I did it." That was good. Made those lines have an even greater importance.

Anyway, great story, I'm glad I came across it. :)
Stef
2006-09-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe story was good. Next time, try breaking up the paragraphs. Huge paragraphs like that are harder to follow.
bmax
2006-09-16
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely loved your take on Wilson's feeling towards House in this critical period for them.
You've opened my eyes to the issues that lie deeper inside of Wilson.
Nice.
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