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| The Swordsman 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this; it provides depth to Wilson's character...why he lied to House about the patient... you've done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work! The Swordsman |
| IceStar4621 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting insight into our beloved Wilson! *snicker* And he says he's the well adjusted one! I liked how the paragraphs were broken up with the repeated line of "I don't know why I did it." That was good. Made those lines have an even greater importance. Anyway, great story, I'm glad I came across it. :) |
| Stef 2006-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe story was good. Next time, try breaking up the paragraphs. Huge paragraphs like that are harder to follow. |
| bmax 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved your take on Wilson's feeling towards House in this critical period for them. You've opened my eyes to the issues that lie deeper inside of Wilson. Nice. |