 Mariel3 2007-08-06 . chapter 2Wow. Well done. The idea that Lee's memories and perceptions are perhaps not totally accurate is very interesting. The idea that some of his pain and some of his difficulties with his father is caused by that is a remarkable one, and you've done beautifully with it. I think where you leave them is very sad, but very fitting. Thanks for a very intriguing read. |