Wonderful drabblings...not that I've read many, I usually don't, actually. I just read yours...XD I'm piecing this chapter to Minerva, because I can't think of anyone else. Is there any character in particular? Hmm...I would definitely not survive without my hands...OMG! Is is Artemis? That bit about his hands, because his two fingers swapped places...but then, what was it about she? Don't worry about me, mindless thoughts...hehe. Maybe both...LOL. Update soon!

Evalia

PS. I LOVE the word "nocturne." So, so much...XD

OOH! very good! I like this one! Its really good! Very deep and also very descriptive! I loved it! Update update!

Wow. I love poetry, and this story is so poetically in form- it's great! i love your description, it's so intense...XD
Update soon!

Evalia

This is a very interesting story to be pondering about. You never use character names, so you guess, and then you think of the plot, because there actually is one, but you have to muse about it...XD The chapters are short, but really filled with information of the plot and the words are so...exquisite. Well done and update soon!

Evalia

*applaudes*

Really, your writing *does* fit the drabble form. Lovelovelove.

In any case, my one bit of concrit is for the beginning. You open with a bit about the music critics complaining about the perfection of the piece. However, the hypocrisy doesn't fit into the human *sense* of hypcorisy, if you get what I'm saying. If you just play around with this - perhaps even just adding that it was "too perfect", versus just "perfect", that would work.

However, the ending was quite nice. "Perfection was never embraced./ And neither was he." Lovelove.

*coughs* But yeah, you and the drabble form really do work quite nicely with each other. With me, it's like trying to knit with a pair of machetes. :P So, keep it up and all!'

Probably TLC Arty and Minerva? You couldnt give us a definate answer no? Did you by any chance write that about the time you wrote Metronome? Coz there are some similarities in them! Great drabble though! Well done!

Hmm...very nice...are you very musical or something? Because I played that too, it's really nice...but then, I like most of mozart's pieces...XD I really want a black grand piano...sorry, just rambling, I might be getting one anyways...

Evalia

Love the title...seriously, I wrote a random story Grazia Impromptu once...it was very good...XD This isn't a one-shot right? Right?

Evalia

Wonderful. A work of art. Nothing more to say.

Update soon!
*adds to alerts*

/:/Brizo/:/

*applause* Great start to another series of drabbles.*aplause* UPDATE ASAP!

*applaudes* Lovely lovely lovely.

A bit of quick concrit:

Some of repetition didn't quite come around completely; the united feeling it's supposed to give to a piece isn't quite there. Firstly, the "Blue Sky. He always wondered." doesn't quite match the "Blue Sky. He wondered./And it never changed." It's just a matter of quick phrasing change, to make them match a bit better, to add to the parallelism and thus give the drabble more closure. The other is more of a gratuitous use of repetition: the second "the colour of her irises" is unnecessary, since the connection between the tea and the eyes has already been established nearby.

Besides that... well, it's lovely. Your writing style really suits the drabble. Love the phrasings, love the emotive imagery. Lovelove.

*coughs* In any case, good stuff. *applaudes again*