Reviews for Allo Allo in Aussie

Serb
2006-09-27
ch 1,

abuseI can see I had some influence on your 'Allo 'allo fics (love potions, Gruber/Helga pairings etc.) and I am flattered that you put me in your favourite authors list.
However, try to be more original. It is a wild, yet interesting idea that they are transferred into 2006 Australia. Plus, you should skip to scenes more slowly and introduce the background in more detail. Heck, it took me a while to get it into practice!
And you can always add chapters, so you don't always need to stuff the story into one page.
Anyway, a good first try. Improve on these point for I'm looking forward to see more 'Allo 'allo fics. It's crap being the only one still into it. ;)

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