WIN. :)

huh. i have never really read this pairing b4... looking forward to it! i thought this was well written and i cant wait for the rest

Nice story!... I don't know what to write more ._.' oh well..

Hehe, I love Sora's random babbling. It was amusing.

wow,great one.But I was hoping you updated already.I mean,the next chapter maybe end in sad ending like cloud marry other guys when Sora just notice his feeling for cloud or vice versa.Or maybe happy ending?Anyway please updated soon

lovely begging!^^
it's the first time i've read cloudXsora and u know what - where the hell is chapter 2?XD
i love it, they're so cute and adorable, u should really continue this little masterpiece of urs!:)
i think u really shouldn't give up on this story, the begging is really good and u could write a brilliant story here, so why not give it a try?;)

chapter 2 my ass XD

xD

well that was quite bizare but still good, hm i'm intreged as to what gunna happen next, is it carrying on? hm well if it is please update soon
luv Faina

My goodness, and he hasn't even had anything sugary O.O

I think you're quickly becoming a favorite author :3

CloudSora, interesting coupling, I don't think I've seenit before, but I liek it already ^^

love it ALOT! so what happened between RIku and Sora? I guess i'll figure it out in the following chapter...or so. STEAK KNIFE! HAHA! sry, i just like knives. don't ask. no, i'm not one of those emos who cut themselves. Sora DOES talk a lot, doesn't he? meh, gtg now. LOVE UR STORY AND UPDATE WHEN U CAN!

You so gotta update with this. Shows a lot of promise! And shame on you for the "The two didn't see each other again." line. Great, but shame! xD

Hey- this is really good. Like super good. .:heart:.[i'loveyouforeverwhenyouupdate]. Thank you~

really good so far, cant wait to read the next chapter. update soon

Oh just update aagain

Its really good keep writing, i want to see what happens next!