|Reviews for Rangers of the Crystal|
| Gear's Girl 12/11/06 . chapter 4
| Dark Yellow Dino 11/27/06 . chapter 2
keep going with this story!
| RPM Shadow 11/27/06 . chapter 2
I love it! Keep going!
| Chylea3784 11/27/06 . chapter 2
Interesting. I do hope you will be updating this story soon.
| AMarieKelly 10/2/06 . chapter 3
I love it I love it I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
| Romilly McAran 10/1/06 . chapter 5
I have some suggestions:
1.) Delete your notes.
2.) Check your list of characters because it is more wrong than ever.
3.) Think about who your characters are and what they would do because I'm not sure that they would react like in the few sentences you have uploaded.
4.) Write longer chapters.
5.) Write a story not a drabble.
6.) The Dino Thunder Rangers have already graduated. They are ready for university (except if you make this AU but than please warn before you do it).
I don't want you to stop writing just to think about what you do. Perhaps read a good book (perhaps a successful fanfic) and look at the writing stile... it helps.
| AdriannaLili 9/22/06 . chapter 4
okay you have my attention now lets see you keep it. i want more please. i can't wait for more please hurry
"you can't fix stupid"
not that i am calling you stupid it is just one of my favorite quotes
| AMarieKelly 9/20/06 . chapter 4
I love it I love it I love it! Update soon!
| Rangerfan 9/19/06 . chapter 4
The concept seems to be a nice idea. But what's up with the chart? I don't get what it's trying to say. Would you terribly mind explaining in your next chapter or something because it is seriously bothering me and I want to enjoy your story to the fullest extent.
Definitely make your chapters longer. And you should check on your grammar. It's not a huge factor right now, but if it amasses, you;re going to lose a lot of reviewers as constant grammatical errors are a huge nuisance. Maybe you should get a beta reader or something.
Keep it up.
| AMarieKelly 9/17/06 . chapter 2
OMG OMG OMG! I love it I love it I love it! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
| Romilly McAran 9/17/06 . chapter 2
But Trents' color is white not red... his zord was the dragozord... I hope you clear my misunderstanding...
Intersting enough but... Trini and Justin? The two haven't even met on the show. She was already a grown woman when he was still a child.
And the dino Ranger were already in their last year in highschool... remember their graduation? (Justin should be their age if I'm correct about counting.) They should be going to universities now.
Funny also that Kira is training. Like the other dino Rangers I didn't think she liked formal fighting all that much but hey: It's your story.
Could you make the chapters longer, please?