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Chubby Cheese Goo
2008-07-16 . chapter 3
I ♥ this story! But, I can wait. ^^ Take as long as you need to. :D I'll be waiting!
naoto-san
2008-03-22 . chapter 3
wow! This story is wonderful :3 I really hope you'll get the feeling back soon :D because I wanna read more from this story :3 I hope things turn out alright for you :)
Gingerbread Moon
2008-02-27 . chapter 3
I hope things get better for you soon and look forward to the continuation of this ^^
Zeppelin
2007-12-20 . chapter 2
SO GOOD! Keep it up, and update faster!!
Hika4Kao
2007-09-04 . chapter 2
This was great, this was fantastic, this was awesome i loved this story!
Sitigu
2007-05-22 . chapter 2
nice you better get that chapter up soon loser! KAWAI god you can be so mean also finish the other story
Toni^^
SWSNBN
2007-05-18 . chapter 2
O.M.G! I was beginning to think the HikaKoa fandom didn't have any good-longer-than-One-Shot fics and then I found THIS! *immensely satisfied*

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for having the guts to deal with the reality of their situation. And not in an unreasonably over-dramatic way, either. I hope you don't plan on making so everyone just has no problems with them when they finally 'come out' (if you're having a happy ending, that is) because...well it IS taboo (although I still love it).

I think what makes this fic is that both of them are REAL and they fit their characters somewhat although I do wish Kaoru was a little less...well, depressive. On the other hand, though, it works out pretty well because Kaoru is the one that thinks things through more and I guess that is what has caused him to get into this rut he's in.

I DO think Hikaru should lose his temper with his twin soon, though. Because Hikaru's always been the one that's more impulsive, and more prone to anger and frustration and sudden lashing out against others...

Anyway, really nice fic you've got here; one of the best I've found in this fandom and I hope you plan to continue it! ^_^
XXyaoianimeXX
2007-05-03 . chapter 2
OMG! You have to update soon!
Mercurial Flux
2007-01-09 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed this.

Hikaru was characterized well, Kaoru also was fairly well characterized. The premise is good. Silly Kaoru, going off to a night club without his brother there to make sure nobody else touches what they shouldn't. ;)

I really want to know now that the twins have almost kissed, and I want to know if anything is awaiting with their parents being home.

Cliffhanger-ish thing!! Damn, I wanted them to kiss. D: Please continue this!
i-see-faeries
2006-12-30 . chapter 2
This was great! I loved it! Your chapters are long, details are wonderful, and it's just great. Update soon!
everfire
2006-11-27 . chapter 2
I would really like to see more most likly because of your evil cliffy. Shame on you you evil author...please update soon!
Petsu
2006-11-01 . chapter 2
I hope the next chapter will be soon! This is really GREAT fic!
Mr. Harlequin
2006-10-08 . chapter 2
:O
I love it!
It's so well written.
And the pacing is simply fantastic.
I like the way you write angst.
It's not overwhelming and drawn out like some authors but there's just enough to keep you reading.
I can't wait for the Hika/Kou fluff though. x3
Hurry and update soon!
Satsukiyami
2006-10-06 . chapter 2
Bah, cliffhanger XD Please update soon!
darkangel36
2006-10-04 . chapter 2
omg!! i loved it! this twins were soo close..i've created a river of drool now..lol this was a freaken great chapter!! awesome work!
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