"quite hard to do when you didn't warn ur friends" LOL!

cute story! i loved it! great job!

awesome

short and sweet.. wished you could have went into depth with why she broke up with him other then the whole school vs the relationship thing but it was awesome

That was so funny! I love dit!

I don't know if I'm a big fan of Lily being so arrogant("Everyone's thinking how lucky you are to have me...") or of James trying to control her... that's just not how I picture their relationship. It seemed like a weak ending because you broke them up and then didn't expand on the getting back together part... I know that wasn't the focus of the story, but it just seemed like you cut the ending off. Wow, this is sounding like a horribly mean review to me now that I'm rereading it, and that's not at all what I intended... it was definetly good to read something from you again, and this was a cute story idea (and I love the title!). I can't wait to read more stories from you!

hilarious!

LOVE IT! xox.

excellently written

Wow! I loved your story! Different to the typical Lily/James fic which is great. And i have to agree completely - a miniskirt is a must have in any girl's wardrobe! Really well written and extremely enjoyable to read! :-) loved it!

very nice story, but she should have slapped him in the face when he told her she looked like a **...anyway great job!

awesome! the ending was sweet. where james turned her up and up against the wall. htat was hot! nice fic!

hahaha... very funny story!! I loved it! bye!^_^

Things I liked about this story:
1. Lily/James - they are like my fave couple.
2. Good grammar - I can't read a fan fic if everything it spelt wrong, it just bugs me.
3. It had plot - so many I have read that have 0% plot.
4. Different - not the same old stuff that you read in every other fan fic.
5. Lily and James got back together in the end (well, kind of) - I hate reading ones where they end up apart and stuff, that is so disappointing.

i kinda like it... cute how he runs after her ^.^ see ya!!

loved it! really funny and cute!