UPDATE!

O.O This is REALLY good.

I hope you continue this.

~YukinoKara

OMG! This is nucking futs! XD Keep up the great work! PLEASE update again soon! ^^

Wow...this is truly amazing!
I love your writing style.The emotions are so well written!
Please update!

Oh, this is amazing.
I've always been fascinated with the person who eventually became Envy. I've never read the anime, so I'm afraid I hardly know anything about him (And I thought it was horribly unfair of next to nothing about Envy to be revealed in the anime).

You've put a beautiful spin on the whole Edward-Confronts-Gate business, too, and made it seem as believable as any other FMA episode. I look forward to reading more about these two. 'Til then.

I like this.
Especially the end of the chapter, its very.
Well-worded, I guess.
You sort of connect to it, even if you don't understand.
Its really good. x3 Please continue.

Excellent! This story holds so much promise that you absolutely need to continue ^_^

I'm certainly looking foward to more, please.

can't wait for the next chapter.

ash892

(stunned silence)Wow! Great story! Though I agree with a previous reviewer. Green-haired Envy Rules the Monkey Kingdom(yeah, I'm crazy). But the polite Envy's really cute, and the way he's thinking...it sounds like he thinks he forgot his LOVER! (giggles) And SUPER SPORKY YAY for Envy being NAKED!(more giggles) Please update soon. And BTW, I didn't think the A/N in the first chapter was rude. I love EnvyxEdo! And you can keep his hair gold! Thanks for the great story.


Ame

Yay Its very good. Personally, They are my favorite pairings as well. Most of my friends thinks i'm weird, but who cares.

Holy crap, they brought back the wrong brother! *lmao* I like it very much, please continue! *goes to read chapter two*

yay! this is really good! ^^ i like the story alot, it's really interesting, and it seems really original to me, at least i've never read any stories with a plot like this! so that's good! anywho...i love the last line on ch. 2...it was cool, and i approve *nods*

I likey!

There certainly aren't enough Human!Palmtree fics out there, and yours takes the Ed-shaped cake.(Do you know the story behind the name Hoju? It's short for Hohemheim Junior XD)

I love your sweet Human!Envy and Ed's character is spot-on. The pairing is

WAY TO GO! I liked the 2nd chap as well! I'm not just saying that! but it's really well written!

But I was kinda' down.. cuz I hate the.. umm (blonde) envy!! the green-haired is way too sexy! lo0o0ol!

keep posting your capters! and have fun writing them!