This is the best fan-fiction I have ever read. I mean seriously are you a professional writer. Excellent really really loved this stiory.

Interesting story so far, but the only thing that puts me off is Aang's accent? Why does he have it?

Holy ** on toast. That was bloody painful. Just reading it all left me feeling hurt and bruised. My gods the poor boy.

This was a damn good chapter. All the action was unfolding behind my eyelids and I simply adored it all. Wonderful wonderful action full of blade and blood and bloodbending; you should be very proud of what you have written here.

Holy ** on toast Batman! Hama is scary. Hell if I were Zuko I would never come near Katara again after that lesson learned. Thank gods she did not kill him, and Song is so loyal going through all that trouble and danger for Katara.

The danger Aang suspected has finally arrived, I wonder what Zuko will do about the news that Aang is the Avatar.

I am loving Jet and Azula, for I am a masochist and love the affairs that hurt the most. Azula is so damn manipulative and knows how to use her words, body, and just about everything that surrounds her to distract and deceive those around her. You really have the character and her ways down pat.

*grins* Zuko and Katara have finally had a close encounter and it seems to me that Katara is interested.

Well, "All the pretty cowboys have daddy issues". Zuko has Ozai, Sokka and the rest have Long Fong, but then if he is not their real father than who is, and how did they all get to be where they are?

I fight scene you wrote between Zuko and the General was intense. I was on the edge of my seat with every word, hoping that Zuko would not be killed. Flove that he ended up winning and has gained the respect he clearly deserves.

Great, wonderful descriptive writing.

Lord Fong kinda scares me, and how is he Sokka and Katara's dad and not Hokkoda? Also cutesome that Aang is the one to notice Katara. I like that you stick to canon in this world and then will veer out.

I wonder how they will react when they find out Aang is the Avatar. Great writing. I am enjoying how even in a different setting you still have the characters remain mostly in character.

I can't help but adore Azula. For all her faults homegirl knows how to manipulate and lie until she is the only victor. The end portion was tres steamy. I wonder what Azula has planned for Jet.

I like that Toph and Katara are sisters, and they seem kinda rich which is vastly different from Zuko and Aang. Star crossed lovers *smiles* Sucks that they are being married off.

Aww man, Jet has yet to learn that "Azula always lies". I hope he doesn't betray Zuko, but I myself wonder what exactly Azula is up to.

You write so beautifully. I am enthralled with each word.

Aw *hugs Zuko* Ursa is dead, Jet is gone or maybe even worse...dead and Mai has rejected him (which I am happy about) but hey he has Aang and Momo and now Sokka. If you just bring in Katara things wil really be looking up for him.

Aww Jest is sacrificing himself for the greater good and Aang being the Avatar who can save everything just stands there.

I am really really enjoying this web that you have woven, and can't wait to see Katara and Toph and Sokka and the rest come into the picture.

I like the Zuko and Jet's friendship. Smellerbee has a lot of fire in her. I found it so funny that she was begging Longshot to let her fight. I really enjoyed the circle of friendship between them that you have introduced.