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| Hybridbabe 2004-07-12 ch 1, | abusehehehe John does get into all sorts of trouble, doesn't he? Not bad for a deficient lifeform from the backwards planet called Erp lol Very nice! Can't wait for more! |
| cofax 2003-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was very cool. Nicely done. |
| Wolfan 2002-05-08 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, great perpective, the great beginnings of a modern PK mythology... do they even have a previous mythology? Hezmana? |
| Readasaur 2001-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. Not too far off the mark. |
| Alison M. DOBELL 2001-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a wonderful twist of perspective. I really was impressed with this view from the other side of the fence, so to speak, and it all fitted the possible profile his enemies would form of Crichton. Makes him sound quite the James Bond of the Uncharted Territories Loved it. Thank you for something so well written and unique. Ali D :~) |
| sky 2001-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseive read that over and over and i still like it. very poetic. do more! |
| Jessie 2000-06-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it. Short, but sweet. I love the thought of getting into the head of a Peacekeeper and what he or she thinks of John and the rest of them. Just some ordinary officer, who knows only what s/he is told. Deffinately expand on what you have here, though it is beautiful by itself. |