...This... is good.

What the hell am I saying?! This is just, just... pure genius. And brilliance. I think this just became the best RoyxEd fanfic I have ever read. And not one of the best - I mean THE best.

I've never seen a writing style that was so comfortable to read. It just flowed - it was seamless! I love your story, since it's usually just Amestris Roy and Edward and not Alter Roy and Edward. It's wuite sad, though. Still, every second I spent reading this was worth it... I'm stupid to not have read this before. So very stupid.

Now, to go check your profile for more great stories~! Thanks for sharing this.

A great ending & it was marvelous job!
I like your fic, a lot!
;)
~^_^~^_^~^_^~

Probably the saddest chapter, I have read so far...
*sob*

I love the part when, Roy braid Ed's hair!
I thing it's romantic...
A splendid chapter, you have make!

Ooh..., I'm so happy for Ed!
I like when Kara asked is her hand gonna fall off!
Great job!
And still nice & well written!;)

Still nice and well written, good job!
I like the part at the kitchen, I found it quite funny.

A good start, I can say. :)
Nice, and well written!
Good job! ;)

This is a pit-stop review, just letting you know that I'm loving it so far and I'm FREAKING JEALOUS AS HELL that you got to meet Nobuo and see Play! live! ARGH! (reviews weren't working when I was on the chapter you mentioned it) This story makes me feel so sad & so happy! :) It's giving me emotional whiplash, luls. You're an amazing writer, never stop writing~

Loved this so much! <33 Made me shed tears. I wish the other Roy... well... sigh. And they left Winry behind. sigh. *sob

aw, this was so cute! XD Wonder about Roy though, not other one... yay, and alphonse went with him too! heheh, loved the journal entries too! ^_^

I loved this story so much! It was very well done, and I look forward to more from you in the future. Keep up the amazing work!!

I must admit that I don't remember a time when I was left feeling this conflicted after reading a fic. On the other hand, I'm extremely happy about this ending, because au-Roy/Ed really are a cute couple and they really missed each other. On the other hand then, I feel really bad for the-other-Roy, although he was only half in love with Ed. But may be he'll get over that faster than the au-Roy could have had...

I don't think I'm making much sense here. X) Of course it is only a good thing that a fic brings up emotions, and this one certainly did. :) I really enjoyed this fic, and it'll go to my favourites. Thank you for this!

Also, I wanted to go over something since there seems to be a bit of confusion. This IS going to be Roy/Ed eventually, not Alter!Roy/Ed. Just gotta be patient with me. :)

the above is what u wrote in ur author's notes for chapter 2. explain to me how it ended up being Alter roy/ed please because i am very confused right now at having wasted all those hours expecting something else. or did u just say that based on who happened to fuck who in this?

Loved it!XD

This is by far the best Roy_Ed fic I have ever read. I haven't found anything as good as it in all my searching. This is probably my 5th time reading it cause it's the story I go to whenever I need my Roy_Ed fix. I love it to pieces and I hope you continue to write stories as good as this one in the future!