This is really cute, and Rodney is an amazing old man

I'm so glad you had him live and give her the money for collage! The ending was perfect. The whole story was REALLY good. I LOVED the way you portrayed the characters-it was just so real! Brilliant job. Brillinant.

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30B and the Military Guy.

You got their voices perfectly.

One of the very best OFC POV stories I have read, in any fandom. Thank you!

This is a beautifully written story. I love the way you wrote it from an outsider's perspective...one who eventually grew to like Rodney. It would be wonderful if you wrote a companion piece to this that showed the events from John or Rodney's perspective. Great job!

You know, I really he was dead for a bit and was horrified. It was nice to know that things worked out in the end. Also, it was of Rodney to try and warn Annie about the SGC before they started looking for her.

That was absolutely fantastic, thank you!

Oh, I actually cried during this. Although that may be because of my emotionally haggard brain and the time in the morning. There is only so much one can take of her mum telling her she needs to retake her GCSE's to 'make grandpa proud'. Anyway, I loved this, it was so surreal and I thought it'd be something like a deathfic, but when you said the whole, but this isn't where it stops bit, I burst into tears. Amazing, beautiful, love it! :D Now to go hide after making a fool of myself with reviews xD

Great story! I'm very glad you went with the ending you did; I would have been heartbroken if I'd been left thinking that Rodney had died. I know that would have been the point but...I much prefer the warm fuzzies version.

Thank you for writing this :)

I really loved this story. It was very powerful and heart, well it was just very heartfelt. It was well written, and at first it had me confused because Rodney was about two years younger than John, but then i started to get it around half-way through. It was very beautiful, and I really liked it.

Wow

It was absolutely beautibul !

Thanks for sharing.

Oh my, this story is incredible!

I love the way you wrote it, it really fit well and then the ending made me so happy you wouldn't believe.

I'm going to go look for a sequel on your profile, but if there isn't one, please consider doing one.

that would be amaing, but either way, I really like this story and shall now hold a special place in my brain.

Heartbreaking but excellent.

I really like this story and I hope that if you ever get the chance, you would write a sequel or something about how Ann meets "those guys" again. Love reading your stuff!

This, was astonishingly good. Excellent! Such a great read! Thank you!