That was the most beautiful thing i have ever read!! Omg I love you! I wish I could read the story of her getting to Atlantis and meeting him again and getting it explained and stuffand I just love her and this story and you and...and...*dies happy*
I think you just made my day. No, scratch that.
I think yo just made my /week/...

I know you wrote this a long time ago but I'd love to see a reunion fic. Where its 10 years down the line and now she's been recruited to Atlantis and finds out that Rodney and John are the same people.

this story was amazing and depressing and so perfect. I laughed, I teared up and I wished McKay wouldn't die. You really gave emotion to the characters and the narrator. John and McKays relationship is one of my favorite things about the series.

Rodney and John as Grumpy Old Men is terrifyingly hilarious. The types of pranks and troubles they would get into!

I loved this story. the format was really entertaining and fresh and actually held my attention better. I loved the OC. This was really insightful and showed a great grasp of character. Two thumbs way way up.

Wow. So even with the sweet happy ending this still had me in tears. So sad, but so sweet. Great job.

Wow... I'm not sure what to say about this story.

Amazing barely cuts it. THIS STORY IS WOW WITH FIREWORKS!!
It's really moving. The part where Rodney dies. Woah.

Keep up the great work!

Great story, the outsider point of view was spot on. Would love a little snippet of her running into him again. Beautifully written and you captured the friendship between Rodney and John perfectly. I really enjoyed! Thanks

Wow, this was really good. I'm so glad that Rodney didn't die in the end. I was afraid that he would. Well done with this; I love all your stories...that I've read anyway.

I'm glad you didn't make this have a sad ending, too - because real life is sad enough and one of the things I like best about fanfic is that the authors have control of their own little versions of the world - so we can have our happy endings and happy ever afters, no matter how improbable they may be!

Great story, and I liked them being 'grumpy old men' too - but I was glad Ann could see through the bickering to see what was really there. Most people wouldn't; they don't take the time.

Thanks for the great read!

OK, I'm laughing and crying at the same time after reading this. I had a friend recommend it the other day, and I didn't get to it until tonight. Wow - just WOW. I thought I knew where this was going at the beginning - and it turns out, yeah, I was right, but I'd kind of given up on that at that point and then ... oh, God, I thought it was too late and I was hoping - HOPING it would have a happy ending and thank you for giving it one.

I'm sorry, I don't normally babble when I review, but I wanted to show just how topsy-turvery this sent me and how much I loved it - and I second the nomination for a reunion. ::grins:: GREAT job!

I really, really like this. Rodney's a pretentious **, but he's a good guy, too, and you exposed both parts of his personality perfectly. The friendship between John and Rodney is lovely.

Enjoyable and fun to read. Thanks for writing it.

This story? Brilliant. I love the image of Rodney and John as old men, Rodney still brilliant and argumentative, John still charasmatic. The point of view was really well done, too, and the ending? Perfect.

I have to say, your story really is really great!
You managed to picture the 'old' McKay and Sheppard like I imagined them at this age.
I think it would be interessting, to see McKay and Anna meet one day at the SGC or so...
Keep up your good work.

hey, that was great.
just letting you know :)