great work i loved it even though she married ron i felt like neville and wouldve had a fling

This is funny and sweet, and eminently in character.

I'm among the tiny minority who think that Neville and Hermione are eminently _logical_ together, so this particularly warms my heart.

I loved the last line.

Sweet and lovely! Thank you very much.

Ha! Go Neville! That's the romance-reading knight in shining robes.

That's really sweet.

- So cute!

Not only is that adorable, it's also beautifully written! You have a real knack for it; great job! And if you're still debating whether to continue on, I highly suggest it, though it is still very nice on its own. Keep up the great work! :)

Um, I think that you should leave this one be and continue with Luke 11:11. THAT one has possibilities.

Kathleen

Hehe. I like the ending best. )

awwwwwwwwwwwww,that's cute. I never even thought of hermione/neville. Good idea.

How sweet. :-) Did it get cut off when you uploaded it or is this just how you want it to end? At any rate, I like it. Neville/Hermione is good, if a tad bit unlikely.

lol kool liked the last bit the best!

That was a very nice vignette; excellent prose, lofty dialogue. I couldn't imagine Neville reading a romance . . . ah, well. And Hermione's frustration was really excellent! I feel that way quite often, and I'm involved in sports! Cool!