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| Cat Alex 2008-01-29 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome action scene! There should be more good ninja fighting in fic. And you kept all their fighting in character, which people sometimes forget. Nice stuff. |
| Kibadelagenshin 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI don't usually think of fighting as a dance, but this story made me question that. Nice job. |
| Uchiha Haruno clan 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was damn good! |
| deity of death1 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. O.O; That was a good SaixSakura. |
| Akkirako Chikuro 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseAh! Kawai I hope you write more SaiSaku's. They're really god xD Especially since Kimbop deleted hers. =( Hope you can write a new one! AkkiChi |
| lilika808 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusethat was so good ! Ow i like it ! |
| alana124pyro 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuse...dude when he kissed her, i KNEW it to good to be true...MOTHERF#$%^ WON!! thats alright though...they ended up together in the end. S'all good. Damn, ur right, that WAS insane. latez |
| raveresque-fantastique 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseI've never been able to do battle/action scenes very well...you're amazing! |
| Mistress DragonFlame 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you have Sakura stronger then Sai in a fight. Very few people would have her as such. They pretty much make her into a one trick pony (super strength), and you did not, for which I am glad. |
| iishima 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseAhh, I loved it. :D |
| animevivverz 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written. I loved how the fight was was described as a dance. |
| T. A. Raskelt 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseWell. Nice tango. |
| Angel Of Depression 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI've read two of your other one shots including this one. All three of them are beautifully written, and I enjoyed reading them. Your writing style has a steady flow to it and the way objects, or interactions between the characters, are described is(in my honest opinion) pretty much flawless. Your choice in pairings are also(once again in my honest opinion) very tasteful when you add in your type of writing style. I look forward to reading more of your work once I finish sending off this review! |
| Goatis 2007-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was a lot of fun! I like reading about Sakura when she's strong (even though Sai won in the end), and that end bit was pretty erotically charged! |
| Spread-My-Wingz-And-Soar 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseOMG! i loved this! it was beautifully written and i really enjoyed reading it! =]] great job with the action scenes too haha |