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| midday 2007-05-24 ch 1,  | abusewill you ever update? |
| blondes beware 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseYou are going to update, right? It's kind of been a while, so I just thought I'd check. keep up the good work and update soon! ~Pocky-Pocky-chan |
| HelloKat 2006-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnd here I was browsing through my list of authors that have me under their profile! I checked out your story when I saw that you had one for Furuba, especially one concerning Yuki...my favorite! Ahem, well, you are correct in your profile's comments...my SOS fic is LONG but now stands at 46! Many more will come, too, so I'm rather shell-shocked myself! Your story definitely holds promise into becoming a mesmerizing storyline. The beginning really reminded me of the interactions I put in my fic long ago between Yuki & Kyo's father. It brought back memories! That (CENSOR) of a so-called 'dad' is not fit to lick my toes! Wonderful portrayal you have here on that man. All in all, the story is put together well. It flows smooth & simply...characters are in-character...grammar/spelling near perfect...honorifics for the most part are great (I believe though that Yuki refers to his family by name only & no honorific--Yuki to Hatori would be 'Hatori', not 'Haa-san'; that's Shigure's reference to Hatori). How's this for a concise review? Heh, it was a very good read, & I look forward to reading more of this mystery you built up already! Keep it up! *~HelloKat~* |
| Serinity's angel 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseoh, how can yuki say that to Tohrru! anyways, update soon, 'kay> SERINITY'S ANGEL ^_~ |