LOL I have an obsession with grammar/typos . . .

Of all the phrasing- she should through you off the roof.

Did you mean "she should THROW you off the roof?" please forgive me for seeming rude, but it made me laugh.

I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing your story, but I am currently running off a DialUp connection, and it takes nearly five minutes to load the stinkin' review box. So I'll do it now . . .

I'm not usually a fan of A/Us, and even less of a fan of Teen Titans (I used to be rabid, but . . . . lol then one day I wasn't.) But I am truly enjoying this story. It's a breath of fresh air to read something NOT riddled with typos and other annoying mistakes. You ARE a fabulous writer, and for that I must commend. Though, sometimes, I find myself getting confused, but I'm usually able to pick what ever's happening back up before something climatic/major happens. :-)

Great Job! I look forward this and am pleased to understand there is also a sequel--expect a review at the end of each story . . . I truly am sorry I cannot review every chapter because your story deserves it! :-)

I haven't really read Batman nor have i read any stories with Tim Drake as Robin, but the Robin that is in most of the Teen TItans (except for the latest revival) was Richard (Dick) Grayson, and during the New Teen Titans comic run (the one from 1980 that I'm currently readin) left Batman because for similar reason that Tim Drake in this story did (mostly because he felt like he was always living in Batman's shadow and had to make something of himself, which is why he later changed his persona to Nightwing when he reformed the Titans). I'm not going to ask you to change it or whatever, I'm just letting you know. and also it is kinda weird to read Tim Drakes name when I'm expecting Richard Drake. At least you didn't use Jason Todd (And if you don't know who he is than shame on you.)

Anyways, this is a good story, and I hope that you plan on updating soon and you didn't just stop writing it because I noticed that it hasn't been updated in 2 years.

I gotta be honest, so far it's a good story. And I'm all for crossovers, but implying that Marvel characters and DC character occupy the same world kinda seemed off,because of how both companies worlds view the people with powers. The X-Men are feared and hated even though their the good guys. and DC's heroes are loved more than pop icons. But other than that, what I've read is very good.

-kobez-

Perfect ending! I loved how you made this story feel like it was the first of many more. I can not wait to read the rest! Please keep on doin what you're doin. Your really good at it.

My sister recommended this story to me, and i have to say i really enjoyed the first chapter. I like how you made everything flow together, something i haven't seen in a long time. Well on to the next chapters. Keep up the good work!

OMg! I have to say, this fic was amazing! every little thing about it blended together and fit perfectly. You managed to change to keep the characters in character, while adding in their own maturity. I don't know how you did it, but it was amazing to read. I was on the edge of my seat, and I loved how you put the Beast into action there, good stuff! I'm going to read the sequal right now!

Very very splendid! I enjoyed reading the whole thing. And I LOVE how you portrayed Beast Boy, he was very much as how I would have pictured him at that age =]. 5 stars!

Awesome stuff here. I love your pacing, so far

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oh plz tell me there is a sequel this was such a beutifully written story plz plz plz tell me there a sequel ill even be your beta

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Awesome ending! Very satisfying, if I do say so myself:D.
-Liss

Again, I like the way you dance around the shippiness with Gar and Raven. Since there's going to be a sequal to this (yay!) it gives you that luxury to let things just kind of play out the way they want to, and not rush anything that happens. That is, if anything does happen. After that bit with Tim and Rae, I put nothing past your devious mind. But again, just enough sweetness to tug at the heartstrings, but not so much as to be cloying.

Darcy... a very interesting character, and definitely not what I thought she'd end up being. Her character, along with the ideas about metas and society you've had in this fic, give this story a bigger scope that what is ususal. I like the sense of a fully-imagined world, with weight and the feeling of a backstory behind it. And it's better than Marvel comic's attempts at doing the whole super-person registration thing. I do hope we see more of that tackled in the continuation.

It was very fitting that you ended this with a Tim-Logan bit. The dynamic between those two ended up becoming the centerpiece of the fic, in a way. I don't think I've seen anyone attempt something like that before, which made this all the more fun to read. Great work, and I'll be happy to be along for the rest of the ride, no matter where it goes.

Ah, Jinx and Cyborg banter... something you do better than pretty much anyone. Cyborg is always done justice when you write him, as you manage to capture the "wise older brother" side of his nature, while avoiding the usual cliches that one sees in his character. And as for Jinx, she's just enough of a bad girl that you don't ever quite know what she's up to, and I'm sure that's the way she wants it. She may be doing good, but her motives are always her own. She and Selina would get along famously, I think. Gizmo's commentary during the conversation is a nice bonus, too.

The continued tension between Tim and Logan is well-done. Not sure how much is personal, how much is genuinely professional, but then it can be hard to tell in situations like this. Plus, the fact that it is Rouge involved gives Logan an extra bit of stress to deal with, as if he needed that. Raven coming in and diffusing the situation was the perfect touch. She's probably the only person he'd listen to in a semi-rational manner, at this point. He seems to want to be her self-appointed white knight, so her words have an immediate effect on him. I like the way you handled it because it's not overtly romantic, but it's still sweet enough for my shippy side to get into.

And in the action sequence, you get right to the tension, with no delays. Putting Raven in that kind of danger with Rouge was just about the last thing Logan could have wanted to happen. Rouge should count herself fortunate that she was merely overwhelmed by the Beast, and not ripped to little bits of shapeshifting goo.

Hm... Cy letting someone else drive his car... I think I just saw an airbourne pig outside my window...

Another excellent chapter. This story may not get the traffic that DOTS did, but it got the same masterful touch. I'm sure the final chapter will be very satisfying.

Yay! There's a follow-up! I'm gonna go read it now! YAYE!

*eye light up* Asassin! I love asassins ^^ Also because wasn't slade an asassin...what! A girl can dream :D

I loved the last chapter! Very nice, I can't wait to see what else you have instore for us all ^^

You're amazing! Feel free to reply this once the new stories up :) But i should be checking.

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