Great story-you really know the characters deeply, and it shows. Great writing as well-it's such a joy to read your stories.

This is a very good history... a little bit short but GOOD!

Nice twist.

That was entertaining. I've seen that episode & I've always wondered what it would be like if Eric walked in on them.

Now I know. lol

-May

This was really good. Thank you for sharing it!

As always I adore your Eric/Donna stuff. I would love to see you do along piece with them.

I love "What If's" but ones that remain true to the characters I cherish such as Donna and Eric. Its always interesting to see the inner emotions and explore their feelings in a way the writers never could or would.

Hyde never really loved Donna rather I always felt he was jealous of Eric having the family and house AND a great girlfriend.

The tone between Eric and Donna and then Eric and Hyde was well done. I think Eric taking a tough stand with Hyde, who he felt could "kick his ass" showed the depth of Eric's feeling for Donna. And that Hyde wasnt prepared to do the right thing by Eric or Donna and step off his going after her showed a darker side of Hyde that was never explored in the series.

Please keep em coming :D

I loved your E/H conversation! Eric was the right combination of pissed off and scared of Hyde. And E/D really are a cute couple...I wish Hyde wasn't so sad, though. I never really liked the idea of Hyde and Donna together; I think that was summed up really well in Hyde feeling like Donna was just some*thing* he wanted. Poor Hyde...can't even understand what a boyfriend is supposed to be about. That's what all of us H/J fools wanted Jackie to teach him. *sniffle* And instead he married a stripper. (Sorry, season 8 reruns, you know) Sad Hyde aside, this was really good, no reason to be nervous. )

Great story! I love your E/D stories! Keep writing!

I love your ED stories, they are so sweet. Oh, and Eric and Hyde's conversation was SO right on. Great job.

That was great! I've always kind of wondered about that whole situation too, and you did a great job with this piece!