ahahahah!!! it's me... again. well, i gess i do read fast. finally, i'm finished whatever you finished writing, and i'm very impressed w/ all of it! please get out your chpts soon! and keep up the great work!

i am completely in love with your story! completely!!! and i have to go to sleep now! nooooooooooo! well i'm gunna save you as my favorites author,
and the story too! it's sooo... sooooo... sooo good!
i'm addicted to your writing. so continue!!!!

oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh^^ oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh!!!
that's all i can say!

hello! it's me reading your stories again! as usual, it is so interesting! i can't wait to get to the next part! I swear, no one can write about Allen the way you do! it's so good! and a very unique style choice of subject! poor allen-ie...
well, off to the next part i go!

This is a pretty good story. I read the whole thing and I really like it. Hopefully, you can finish it.

i like!!! ummm do i sound dumb or what? Hey this is a nice change from the happy joy joy stories where everything seems to go to perfect and everyone finds their true love.......sigh......*blinks*

actually, it's rather good, please write more. Wouln't it be cool if umm..Aryan? or some thing like that...gave Allen a mechanical arm like Foken's?