 artisticpsyco56 2007-02-10 . chapter 1haha yay, first story i read on here! lol it was good! |
 OrganizationofChaos 2006-12-15 . chapter 6Troublesome, time to review once again.
Hey, this was a really good chapter. LOL, Luffy glomped her for no reason, and Sanji was being Sanji, as usual.
Well, thats all, now its time to look at the clouds once more. Please update soon! (Looks at clouds, then falls asleep.) -.-z... |
 A Unique Kunoichi 2006-12-13 . chapter 6Lol! That was funny when Luffy got Kiro and Nami walked in and said "Am I interrupting something?" Great job! |
 dragondancer123 2006-12-10 . chapter 6Anou...Don't you mean KOneko? I liked the chapter, but since I don't really know the charecters of One Piece...It was a tad confusing. Anyway, thanks for updating. I feel your pain with the school thing... |
 OrganizationofChaos 2006-11-27 . chapter 5Troublesome, time to review once more.
Very well written chapter. I love how Shinkiro goes ballistic and thinks Zoro is going to kill her,LOL. I an totally imagine that happening in the anime.
By the way, was the lyrics in the last chapter from the original anime? It was cool, got to check it out.
By the way, if dragondancer123 is wondering who Mr.Crispy is, its me.Hi!
Hey, are you going to review my story soon, CheshireSphinx? I havent got many reviews, and if you reviewed mine, then that makes me happy. (:
Well, back to looking at the clouds once more. (Looks at clouds, then falls asleep.)-_- z... |
 dragondancer123 2006-11-06 . chapter 5Happy Birthday!! *tries to send present through the computer* See I tried! I like the part when she thinks that Zoro is going to kill her! Hilarious! |
 dragondancer123 2006-11-06 . chapter 4Pull a Shigure! haha! Are you going to put Faruba in here too? See I'm reading more then one chapter! And I'm reveiwing! Good chapter! Can you make them longer too? |
 dragondancer123 2006-11-06 . chapter 3Now you're REALLY sleeping with Sangi and Lee! Anyone who has seen them would know...Did you mean for it to be so obvious? What animes are there? I'm stupid so I don't know... |
 dragondancer123 2006-11-06 . chapter 2Do you really have that one?! Guess who? Do you know the title for Mr. Crispy's story? Does Willow-chan know? What's his screenname? Don't tell me it's Mr.Crispy...Anyway good chapter. A little confusing though... |
 dragondancer123 2006-11-06 . chapter 1Hiya dude! Remeber me! My screenname is the same as the one on youtube. The one who never answers your messages...Nice begining. It kinda gives away the story though...:) |
 A Unique Kunoichi 2006-11-06 . chapter 5Cool! This chapter was awesome! Poor Shinkiro, thinking Zolo was going to kil her. Anyway, Great job! Please update soon! P.S. Happy belated birthday! |
 Animelover5.6 2006-10-28 . chapter 4That was really cool! The plot is extremely unique. ^^ |
 A Unique Kunoichi 2006-10-18 . chapter 4Cool chapter! Your writing's truly amazing! I envy your talent! Keep up the good work! |
 Sora-The-Airbender 2006-10-09 . chapter 1Oi! It's Sora!
It's looking great so far! Update soon!
PERSERVIANCE! |
 OrganizationofChaos 2006-10-08 . chapter 3Troublesome, once again, its time to review. (Reviews) Cool, fuzzy brows is in it, he so troublesome with his "power of youth" thing, though. But he's cool, and so is Sanji. I hope to read more! Well, back to writing my fic, and then looking at the clouds. (Looks at clouds):) |