L's first case, and Lights firs moments with the Death Note. Incredible, really, how you wrote them. It's interesting to stay and ponder about Light's emotions after he first used the notebook, and how, from something horrific, it transformed into a routine. The same goes for L, he got accustomed with the feelings, after a while.

Very nice! It's refreshing to read a fic that just features L and Light with no yaoi =) Thanks for posting!

Excellent. I really like the style of writing. Very deep and insightful. Characterization is wonderful.

Lovelovelove it~ I would really rather have had this as two seperate documents, though, or at least tied together in the end somehow. Still, very good. The L one particularly. ^w^

Oh, oh, oh. I love it. I love L nearly losing himself in his complete understanding of this other person; I love seeing Light still (though by the end of the manga he really seems to have finally, completely, burned these thoughts out of himself) unable to ignore his own conscience. This story is just, just fabulous.