 Geekies 2009-06-26 . chapter 1See?! Tugger's nice! Who said so otherwise?! XD
Such a forgiving soul!~ |
 XedwardIStheeHOTnewBAGELx 2009-02-21 . chapter 1OMG that is great!
I love it and it is so typically Etcii!!
I love my tugsy wugsy |
 Mystitat 2006-09-30 . chapter 1Yay. This turned out well. ^_^
I would have liked to see, though, more of a Pinky and the Brain -style- adventure, like, oh, I dunno, they devise a plan to take him over involving shampoo, pretending to be toms, making a device out of window blinds and toothpicks, things like that. Maybe it could come in in future chapters? You did leave the end of this one hanging. ^_^ |
 Bomba-Fae 2006-09-20 . chapter 1Pinky and the brain... Hm I remember that. I remember that all too well. OMG I had completely forgotten about that show; havn't seen it in years. LMAO I always imagined electra as the smart one... Book smart or just plain smart. It was really cute; liked it alot. You should write more. |
 Serendipity Kat 2006-09-20 . chapter 1Vedra! *glomps* Hi, hon. Nice story btw... |
 Robot Maddness Strikes 2006-09-18 . chapter 1tehehehehehe, very funny.
~Tubomba ^.^ |
 Maudey 2006-09-18 . chapter 1First off, not too bad.
I'll admit, it did run rather fast, but over all it wasn't too bad at all. I thought it was adorable how you portrayed Electra as being a little cute and sneaky mastermind. There was a few typoes that can be caught by reading the story over, but, the only one that really bothered me was this:
Why had she said that terrible thing.
it should be:
Why had she said that terrible thing?
Nit-picky am I? Probably.
Anyways, not too bad at all! |
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