nice story you got here, except you're kind of giving the new Terrans too much power with the Dragon tanks

Fascinating this, Kerrigan not seeing that a threat has arisen. Never underestimate your enemy.

Great storie the best starcraft storie I.ve ever read. Countinue the good work.

Very good story, close to CE Flemming's fic in terms of quality(Saying this is a BIG compliment). I hope you update your fic soon.

The Velius Terrans are not from Earth. I mentioned the UED remember?

This group are like the colonists, expect their technology survived intact, unlike the other Terrans who crashed.

So, they didn't have to build from scratch. If you guys want, I can put in the background story of the Velius Terrans.

Sorry, I meant try not to make the Earth Terrans too GODLY (good guys are ...good)

Nice fic there again man! Just try to tone down the Earth Terrans, hmm? They seem a tad too goodly for my taste (but that is just my opinion) There were a few grammar mistakes, but oh well that happens. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more chapters soon! :)

Dude, you kick ass. Thought the terrans having such advanced technology is a bit far-fetched, but very, very good!

Greetings to all the people who read this,

I'm sorry if I don't update very consistently. Anyway, in your reviews, I'd like you to comment also in the way I create these battles, and whether they are "realistic" enough in the world of Starcraft.

Now for some notes:

To Milk, who asked me this quite some time ago, 4 months now, Kerrigan got tired of admistrating the Zerg broods, and recreated the Overmind as a super-cerebrate bound to her will. Also, she uses and make cerebrates in creater numbers now, seeing cerebrates as "Commanders" of not only a Brood, but leaders of major force concentrations of Zerg Troops.

If there are any questions, I'll try and answer them here in the reviews, or in the fiction chapters if I remember about them. Again, I thank all my reviewers, and readers.

Oh goodie, I was hoping you'd finish this. :)

Great story so far. Maybe Raynor and his little band will make an entrance soon?

Hope to see more in the not-to-distant future. ;)

whow! great story, I love the way the terrans are kicking ass now, hope there will be a new chapter soon.

...wow! great fanfic! It captures the battles Starcraft is known for perfectly! keep goin!

nice,nice, and nice. i've been playing starcraft for 4 years now and i like this. there are lots of fanfics of starcraft which don't quite get the excitement of the game, but your fanfic is unique. the new technology nad units, i wish they would be incorporated into a new starcraft game. that is all.(

Another great chapter, keep going, were all hooked!

Hey ho! Great story so far! I am really enjoying your chapters and hope that you write more soon!

However I have a small question to ask. The story takes place 17 years after Brood War, yes? So if that is true, how can the Cerebrate be connected to the Overmind when the Overmind no longer exists? Well besides this small discrepency, the story is fantastic! Keep up the good work; it's been a long time since I have enjoyed a fic here.