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Reviews For: The Dear Polar Bear
Xhoelli 2007-01-15 . chapter 3
Just saw chapter 3. ==

LOVE IT!

Ana and Claire interaction, yay! :)

Kate having Ana's polar bear? *sporks her... or Sawyer* ;) Hope it doesn't go Skate ;p Can go Sana... or stay gen, 'cause it's already awesome :D

"“You’re one heavy little boy, you know that?” she smiled as Aaron laughed and shrieked, showing a toothless mouth. He tugged at her loose strand of fringe and she looked at his face and couldn’t help but wonder what it would have been like to raise her own child."
AWW.
Rambina 2006-10-11 . chapter 2
GreT STORY, UPDATE SOOn, please
Xhoelli 2006-09-26 . chapter 2
AWW! Ana and Aaron, I've always loved the idea, and in your fic it's so perfectly cute and real!
I hope you find time to update, 'cause it's all definitely intriguing. :)
Audio Pineapple 2006-09-20 . chapter 2
I liked the way you were forming your descriptions, such as with the ocean and the sand.
Audio Pineapple 2006-09-18 . chapter 1
It's got a promising start - you should update soon.
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