Oh, this is wonderful! And you're really selling me on the first-generation spies, too. I love how well Sloane can slot altruism into his other determinations, and have it, in a weird way, still remain altruism.

Awesome. Touching, intriguing, disturbing, an excellent tie-in to the begining of Sloane's Rambaldi journey. I love the interaction of Sloane and Jack on assignment.

Perfect. I feel this will be one of your best works.