I compliment you on writing a Spaced fanfiction that actually contained a number of real laughs for me. It's not often that I've any fanfiction which achieves occasions of genuine humor. In that regard, you've surpassed the crowd. Well done.
I have to say, chapter 2 of this fic had some excellent moments in it - most notably paintballing Jar-Jar and Mike appearing on 'When TA Soldiers Go Bad!'.
Please continue - there's just not enough Spaced fic out there! I'd write some, but, y'know - I'm just not funny.