 RabidYaoiFangurl 2009-11-01 . chapter 11...THANK GOD ENNAROSE INSPIRED YOU! <3 Seriously. :3 I just started reading this yesterday, but if I had seen that it was updated three years ago I would have been P.O.ed xD You're like that chick didn't throttle you on sight ;D
I haven't been able to stop reading this story, it's so adorable! Sasuke and split personalities is hilarious xD Though, yeah, a bit unnerving, thank god he hasn't been too scarred by the pervert snakee. x3
But yeah, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, and you updating QUICKLY withs LOTS more adorableness will totally make my life. =D (And man, I thought Naruto was going to bite Sasuke when he started looking at his neck xD) |
 Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten 2009-10-23 . chapter 11Loved! Gods above, I can't the chapter 12. Update really really soon, please!
Smutty NaruSasu Day! |
 dragon695 2009-10-13 . chapter 3It's a good start, but I think it is lacking in a few places.
First, why do you keep referring to Naruto as "she" when he thinks about himself? Despite his disguise, he is still a boy and unless you are saying he's transgendered, it would be rather shocking to have someone in such a situation so comfortably slip into such a mindset. I mean, yes, he would try to act like a girl but I'm pretty certain he would still think of himself as a boy. Yes, I do realize he is disguised as a female, but it still feels weird reading it when you've indicated that he doesn't really like having to use the disguise anyways. I can understand when you are narrating Jiraiya's or any other character's POV, as they do not know he is really a boy. All I am saying is that you might want to cut out the she prounouns when you switch to either his POV or the narrator's POV.
Second, I find it rather far fetched that Naruto can turn off his healing like a light switch. I understand this was written during the "ohnoes I can't use Kyuubi anymore b/c I **-slapped Sakura with one of my chakra tails when I was KN4" phase Naruto was going through (yeah, that sure lasted long...), but maybe you might want to revise it now that his commitment has faltered in canon. It makes no sense now and it really seems stupid to refuse something that keeps you alive. Naruto may be thick, but he isn't that dumb.
Otherwise, I like the story. I think it has a solid foundation and I look forward to reading more. |
 Kyoko kitty-chan 2009-10-10 . chapter 11Wow! This is great!
It's fantastically written, your writing is very descriptive and gets the point across right away.
I love Naruto in fox form, he's just so adorable and I'm glad Sasuke's not a complete bastard in this fan fiction because in most fan fictions he is. People don't seem to understand that he still is a person even if he's chosen the wrong path to follow.
I also love the different personalities you gave him. It makes it more realistic for some reason, I think I would go crazy too after being with Orochimaru for that long.
Anyways I can't wait for the next update. This fan fiction definitely has my interest. =) |
 ooxshinobixoo 2009-10-09 . chapter 11aw how cute |
 Halskr 2009-10-08 . chapter 11I am glad to see this update. I really enjoy these types of stories right now since the manga is so frustrating. Its nice to read a story that is light and doesn't focus so much on the combative nature of these two characters. I wonder how long it will take Naruto to start to suspect Sasuke? Can't wait till the next update. Thanks for writing and sharing this. |
 Faia Sakura 2009-10-08 . chapter 11Some fanfics are more memorable than others, even it they haven't been updated in the longest time. This is one of them. When I saw the alert for a new chapter in my inbox, I thought "Ohmigod, this is that one with Sasu-kun and Naruto as a fox!"
I am terrible at writing reviews though, so I'll go with the average boring common type. Great chapter, hope it doesn't take a hella long time for the next one since I want to know what'll be happening next! ^.^ |
 piratepenguin666 2009-10-08 . chapter 11If Naruto were an actually wild animal, wouldn't he probably squirm around? He is horrible at acting like his disguise sometimes haha. Well it seems like another transtion chapter though Sasuke's treatment of Naruto wasn't as bad as I thought it would have been. Can't wait til the next update
~read ya later |
 Queen brat 2009-10-08 . chapter 11please update soon...i couldn't stop reading |
 Koolneko22 2009-10-08 . chapter 11Great chapter!!
Sasuke can be mischevious when he wants to be.
I was wondering how he could train with Naruto when he was so injured. But you found a way.
I love this.
Keep up the good work! |
 EnnaGirl 2009-10-08 . chapter 11Kya~! I love it ^^
Hurrah for another chapter! and I'm so glad I could help you to write more! But wow, I totally didn't notice that this story has been running for 3 years. Anyway girl, keep writing please, it's such an interesting story.
Eheh. Has to go now before my Mum has a cow.
^^ Love, Enna Rose. |
 Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten 2009-07-22 . chapter 10Absolutely loved! I actually read this at AFF but since it's somehow easiedr to work here I wen't to your LJ to see whether you had an account here, and now I'm here. lol. I hope you update really soon, because this is awesome! You keep Sasuke so IC it's almost impossible! Amazing work! |
 twilightserius 2009-06-03 . chapter 10ha sweet on how the touches arouse those of voulpine blood n images rage within the ravens mind to bring together lovers destined for all time XD |
 KagomeGirl021 2009-05-01 . chapter 9hey im curious as to when you will update this fic. its really good! i want to see what happens in the end. like if naruto and sasuke finally reveal that one sasuke knows naru-chan's secret and two naru Reveals his secret. i also wanna see them get together and to bring sasuke back home. PLZ UPDATE SOON!! |
 black laurel 2009-04-28 . chapter 10I really like this fic!
First of all the way you write interaction between Kakashi and Naruto is awesome, and the plot is very interesting. I have no words for the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke. No words.
About this chapter:
"Sasuke rolled his eyes as Uchiha-sama attempted to influence Sasu-kun for the worse."
That's so many ways awesome.
"The Uchiha wondered briefly whether the blonde expected him to just run off again. It was a strange thought since Sasuke had chosen by his own freewill to care for the animal to just abandon it in mid-healing, but then again the boy rarely understood how Naruto’s stubborn mind worked."
I liked that.
"Many of the elder Uchiha would have greatly disapproved but damn, Sasuke was going to have fun."
Oh yeah!
"Maybe it was the fever talking - Naruto swore madly he had a fever from the wound - but Sasuke looked incredibly attractive right then."
Riight... The fever talking. Pfft. :P
"It was a subtle yet cruel reminder there were new facts about his friend that Naruto did not know, compounded by all the things he'd been ignorant of before Sasuke even left."
So many problems between the two of them...
"If foxes could smile Naruto would have had a huge grin coupled with a semi-dazed expression since it was not like Uchiha Sasuke, the Avenger Prince, waited hand and foot on anyone or anything."
Heeheehee...
But yeah, I've really enjoyed reading so far! I hope that you will be able to update soon. :) |