That's an interesting take on it. I got the impression that reuniting the Black Wings resulted in the permanent hibernation of Dark and Krad. Your writing style is great, though. No misspelled words, run-ons, etc etc etc. Well, there are a couple places where you switch abruptly from past tense to present. It's a bit disconcerting, but forgivable.
The kissing scene is so cute! I've been trying to find a fic w/ a realistic pairing of those two and this is the first I've encountered one. I have to commend you on it. You definitely have great talent. I'll check out some of your others.
Personally I'm depressed. I spent 2 years making a semi-good 10-story long series of Code Lyoko which got me a good collection of loyal fans. But only one of them (out of about 20) has said anything at all about my DNAngel fic. Ok, now that I'm done rambling, I'll get to the point. Just out of curiosity, would you take a look at it and tell me if it needs work or anything? I mean, I know it does, but it would be nice to have a review from someone else who's a good fan of the show. Anyway, I'll quit now while I'm ahead.

nice one. just the right amount of fluff. =)

OMG! It's so sweet! keep up the good work!

Aww it was really sweet and well-written! Great job :)

This was great!! I can't believe you wrote it in one sitting. It's so well written. :D Great job. I thought it was the ending was the sweetest thing.