i loved it keep writing

oh I love it! I love how you have written both sides to the story, please right some more, maybe like when they express their feelings, that would be so sweet! Great story.

WOW, I thought thar was awesome. You should write more to it.

BIG. DAMN. SQUEE.
Loved it. I told you you could do it! I was so thrilled to see my line in there. This was really great, I really enjoyed reading it. I'll literally be bouncing in my seat until I get another update from you be it Bones or The things Men Do. Love it!
Ava

If i could add it to my favourites I would, but there's a stupid limit...