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Hannah J Granger 2008-10-23 . chapter 15
Amazing,and adorable...great job!
FF.netfanHANNAH 2008-06-24 . chapter 15
No...no...no...no ending the story there. You can't end a story like this at a place like that.

keep on typing
* hannah *
WriterC. 2008-05-12 . chapter 15
Finally, a pregnancy story with a great plot and not completely out of character! That situation with Brennan and the woman in the cabin was very thriller-like, I loved it. The ending as well by the way! Good job!
katie 2008-05-07 . chapter 15
aw wow love this story i read the one after this before so i was hoping it wasnt the story before but owell
great story!
x
allymcnally 2008-04-04 . chapter 14
Grammar check...seriously
allymcnally 2008-02-18 . chapter 15
Good story, though the ending seems very rushed, like you ran out of ideas and just wanted to get it over with.
Missy 2008-01-26 . chapter 15
I absolutely loved this story! Great characterization - I felt like I was watching the show (with shipper-friendly writers, that is...) Great suspense, and it was very, very sweet! Now I'm going to have to read more of your stuff... that's just great, grr. LOL Keep up the good work!
CTripleJ 2007-10-12 . chapter 15
This ROCKED! LOVED IT ALL!
Mishelle20 2007-10-04 . chapter 15
This was a great fic, it's awesome that everything worked out.
EmEx 2007-06-08 . chapter 15
Well, It was a very entertaining story. I loved the beginning, you were exploring Brennan's reactions in a realistic way and I can understand her choices, according to the own context you created, but the last chapters seemed rushed, as if you hadn't managed them with the same care you had with previous ones, and that is such a shame because I can see you're a fine writer. The most expected moment, the birth and bonding with the new born felt a bit floppy. I think it would be great if you re-checked your fiction; your work is worth it.
EmEx 2007-06-08 . chapter 2
Really interesting. So typical of Brennan to refer to the baby as "Living tissue".

I'll keep on reading.
Just Kitty 2007-05-02 . chapter 15
I loved that so much! ^^
ilovebuttfacemiscreants 2007-02-22 . chapter 15
yeah! this was a great ending, it was sweet, and whatsherface didn't get the baby, i think tyaler will grow up to be the hottest man in the world with such good looking parents. good job.
ilovebuttfacemiscreants 2007-02-22 . chapter 4
FINALLY he noticed i was getting worried that he would actually not find out, i was getting a little worried there.
cutecowsgomoo 2007-01-20 . chapter 15
LOVED your story. I could really see it happening like that. Well Done!
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