 Ludi 12/4/03 . chapter 1You know, it's a while since I read this, but I still can't get over the fact that you wrote such an excellent piece while a) feeling frustrated and b) hating the character you're writing about. I've said it before but I'll say it again - you really give the 'Dimwit' a mind and a heart here. Lovely stuff, well written and -dare I say it - very empathetic :) |
 Gourry Gabriev 1/11/02 . chapter 1 Just finished reading this (read the other T-Bird 3 work beforehand) and man, this is some damn good stuff! ( I just know some of that will be censored..) Have you ever thought of doing other introspective pieces on underused characters? I wouldn't mind seeing some stuff on Doug Ramsey, Dazzler, or Longshot, if you're in anyway up for suggestions. Please continue the very excellent work! |
 Pip's Sister 7/20/01 . chapter 1Good work, Sin! A nice little story, even if you still call the guy "The Craphead from Calcutta." I liked the story, anyway. Pretty logical and everything. |
 Iron Centurion 7/1/01 . chapter 1 Wow...you accomplished so much with so little! Do you hate Neal Sharra any less now?:) |
 anon 6/17/01 . chapter 1 Ooooh, yes. Yes, yes, yes. I'd read and review this just because it's about one of my favourites, who's been used *far* too little. To top it all, it's *good*. Thanks a lot; I needed this one. Reflective, well written... It's the style Neal would use if he wrote something, I think. I honestly believe that you captured his character in a beautiful way. Thank you. |
 Waterfall 6/14/01 . chapter 1FINALLY someone who writes about Neal Shaara! And to write something like this as well! I have to admit that it's not the way I think Neal feels about the X-Men, but that doesn't really matter, does it? This is a good fic anyway. |
 4Rogue 6/13/01 . chapter 1 A Neal story. Not a lot of those and you explained the name in a fairly decent manner - better than Marvel. More less used characters! |
 The Bud 6/13/01 . chapter 1 Insightfilled. Yer ol' pal, The Bud. |