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Reviews For: Tale As Old As Time

Abbey06
2006-12-06
ch 1,
abuseaww, this story was so cute and sweet. I love the way Luke had Rory and Lane helping him with the costume and music, and how he and Lorelai danced in the gazebo. Seriously, this story was great.
CharmedGurlie
2006-09-22
ch 1,
abuseAw!! That was soo cute! It was such a good idea, too. I loved the costume thing (Belle is my favorite, lol). Again, amazing job!
mandeeangel
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abusei LOVED this stpry!!
it was really well written and i loved that Luke told ROry and Lane about his idea.
Lulu ala Rue
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abuseOh, it was so incredibly fabulous! It was so sweet that I wanted to cry! Just for some critiquing, make sure your spacing between some words, as they get clumped together. Also, to make it funnier, add some more wit to it. Good Luck and keep all of it coming!
remoob1513
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abuseso sweet, so cute. i LOVE the matching costumes. awesome job. cant wait for more amazing stories!
Babs25
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abuseWhat a Romantic story! I truly enjoyed reading it! Great Job!
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