nice fic, not many ppl like putting in details, most rush to the point...

Great fic. I loved the emotion and how you went into both Sakura's and Kakashi's minds.

I like it! Please make more kakasaku, they are one of my favorite pairings

What a story. Very beautiful one indeed. Thank you

That's the best KakaSaku I've read in a while. I see you got the idea from your IruSaku fanfic. I like it myself and it seems very Kakashi of him. Grand job and good luck!

I neversaw Kakashi as OOC in this fanfic, but perhaps I'm used to your style because I've been reading it for so long. I love the way you portray the Naruto characters with such emotion and this is one of those peices that just stuck out to me.

I definitely think it should win the contest.

a little bit confusing in the middle but it all worked out great in the end. Good job!!

Hey Melissa!

What an excellent entry! (By the way this is InuyashaLizzie from the club. ;D) I was so thrilled to read this, and I'm sure Na0k0 is as well. :D I was really hoping that you'd enter since your KakaSaku writings are the best.

dear Melissa Norvell,

it was a good story, but you got the ages wrong. Kakashi and Sakura are 14 years apart, so if Sakura's 17 then Kakashi is 31... plus Kakashi was a little OOC (out of character), but other than those little facts, bravo! :D

-CC15

That was good, but i think i read something really similar before w/ Sakura&Iruka.
but it was a really nice story!!