 aura 2008-02-05 . chapter 3 Is really beautiful ^_^ |
 skittlesandcombos 2007-06-02 . chapter 3Oh my God! I LOVE your story! I have never read AU's cause I thought it took something away from the way the show is, but you proved me wrong. This one is going on my favorites list. PLEASE update soon. I'm begging you! |
 sanriochica333 2006-11-21 . chapter 3 friken awesome. that was really good can't wait til you update ^_^ |
 sanriochica333 2006-11-21 . chapter 1 sounds really good and interesting. different but good different. oh i'm reading this with Can't Be Without You by Mary J. Blige. really good ^_^ |
 realfanficts 2006-11-06 . chapter 3Whew! What a day for Song! Nice chapter.
Take your time. We wouldn't want you to outrun your creativity, now would we? |
 Zelscar 2006-11-05 . chapter 3^o^ I must admitt, I normally don't like AU's but I -really-like this. Keep them updates comming! ^-^
~Zel |
 Millefiore 2006-11-03 . chapter 3Really, really well done! Intriguing chapter than the last, I can't wait for the next part.
^__^
The way you write makes me feel like I'm right there...everything flows from one line to another...it's great.
Keep it up! |
 cruixe 2006-11-03 . chapter 3wicked! dude even without any knowledge of Avatar this is awesome, seriously.I mean the whole resistance thing, and having it from Song's POV is cool, since she's a non-bender i guess it's easier to understand how she sees this then it would be for Katara or any of the other benders.It's just easier to..relate to her,i guess is what i want to say. It's kind of cool how they all live undergound too. The title kind of made me tink it would be like cave of two lovers...is it that kind of cave or what? Oh yeah, you know what else i noticed? You're wicked good with first person. Kind of hard to write, that is. But it's good. |
 Nuclear Kitty 2006-11-03 . chapter 3I think this story holds promise. Great job! |
 MormonMaiden 2006-11-03 . chapter 3Waa...you make this so powerfull..just a few tweaks would make it something you could probably go out and publish! So cool, so cool... I'll still have you on alerts whenever you're ready to update! |
 me-obviously 2006-11-02 . chapter 3Awesome chapter. Is Azula a bender in this? Update soon, please. |
 Random Stuff About Stuff 2006-11-02 . chapter 3Aww! Probably a ton of pop-culture references that I'm missing here, but I like it anyway.
Usually I don't like futurfics, but this is really good. Like how you have everyone fit some role.
This is really good. Keep it up!
-Random |
 Rainbow-Jess 2006-11-02 . chapter 3AS I HAVE SAID. ULTRASUPERMEGASEX.
;D< 3 |
 realfanficts 2006-10-11 . chapter 2Sorry I didn't review earlier--I lost most of my internet priveleges for a week.
OOH, this story is already intense! Was that Zuko's sister and her team? |
 cruixe 2006-10-09 . chapter 2wow. i liek this. huh i like song, even though i never saw her. i love how you write her. and about her i wish i could hate you attitiude towards katara. i know so many girls like that. and it's cool how she meets them and talks about his scar and stuff. i really liked this. |