Interesting story.

haha a funny and sweet story
i loved the end xD

I don't think this pairing sucks. I absolutely love H/Hr. Its my favourite to read. I would love to see a sequel to the story. One shots are fantasic, but they always leave me wanting more. Especially with this fantastic story. Great job.

Hi there, I know this was finished a long time back, in fact I dont even know if you are still writing, if you are then can I suggest you rewrite this one, It may have been a good story but I was unable to fionish it, I tried but after just a few lines of dialogue I had to give up, its not that the dialogue is bad but for each line spoken you have the wrong name.

I.E. '“So if you never really fancied Ron than why did you agree to date him in the first place?” Hermione paused for a moment'

each line of dialogue you have is the same, Harry's lines end with Hermione as in the one above and all of Hermione's lines end with Harry. as in this next line...

'“I thought you were in love with Ginny.” Harry gently turned her face back towards him.'

This line makes it seem like Harry thinks Hermione is gay.
It is far to confusing to keep remembering who is supposed to be speaking, readers need to read a story and enjoy it without having to continualy think about how the writer places names wrong all the time. If you have any other stories and you want more reviews for you should check those as well.

I really liked it - I ususally dont like HHr unless they are written perfectly - and this was SO one of them! Beautifully written - I love your style. Also very romantic - and the thing with Ron and Luna at the end - priceless!

This was so funny u should write more like this

now if you would of wrote a quote with Luna mentioning pudding, it would of ended funnier! Though ending it the way you did was perfect!

Loved it. Luna was great at the end.

"Anyway, you have to admit their children will be gorgeous."
LOL
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I loved it. The style, the pacing, the dialog, just everything. This is ending up in my favorites and my C2. Keep on writing; you have a talent for it.

well after reading your boyfriend drives that i thought i would see what other stories you wrote and i'm glad i did cause this is another great one i can't wait to read some more of you stories

i absolutely love the HGHP pairing...it's my personal favourite! anyway nice story!

Loved it. So funny. "Something, I don't want to throw up." And yes, they will have the most beautiful children.

Cuteness! ^.~

funny, funny dirty but great.

I think Luna and Ron are a truly great couple.