I finally checked this out after you told me some about Evangelion and I knew I would understand it better.

I really liked this first chapter, very intriguing and caught my attention, the flashbacks were cool, love Asuka's attitude.

I wish I had looked at this sooner before you said you were going to delete it.

I thought it was well written and the format was good. All in all, great fic!

*Slifer-sama

Not bad, especially for a first fic. I've got an issue with your format though. You should probably try and seperate paragraphs, especially when you change whoever is talking. Their were places in this where I couldn't even tell who was speaking.

It was still good though. You did a nice amount of flashbacks in there. However I hope you have plenty of non-canon material in store for us by the end of the fic. Keep it coming and good luck.

YAY! That was a good first chapter, I liked the flash backs. This really sounded like Asuka she wasn't to mean or to nice. I cant wait to see what shewill do after the test. I hope that in the next chapter we get to hear more from Shinji and Misato. Though I like how the first chapter was all about Asuka.Good job I'll definitely be back for more