Wow! I really love the plot you've set up here and I would have to say that I don't find your characters annoying at all. They're perfectly fine as they are. They both have room to grow which is much more interesting as it truly would be annoying if they had no faults or imperfections in their character. Your Mew legend is just adorable. Where did you get the idea? Please keep updating. I've read your story from the beginning and hope you will continue this story. It's been nearly three months since the last chapter! I hope you don't have a bad case of writer's block. I look forward to your next chapter!
Ri2 2006-09-28 . chapter 2
Ah, Kouta's such an **.
This is an original take on the usual 'look for legendaries' point of view. And, of course, on the way they're going to discover maybe being married won't be so bad after all.
Ri2 2006-09-28 . chapter 1
...Oh dear god. XD That poor, poor girl. Now she has to marry this guy. Well done.