I Like This. I hope you decide to continue with it. *SMILES*

I thought I was the only person in the universe who loves the Javert/Cosette pairing, so I was overjoyed to find your story! I hope you plan to update!

Please, please, please continue. I hate it when good stories go to waste like this. It's been two years, true. But... PLEASE!
This is absolutely fabulous.

Eh, no offense, but this seems kinda weird...Javert? And Cosette? I'd have to think about that...

Otherwise it's well-written and has good description. Good job!

ok it's been over a year, but you need to update, and SOON!

it's so good, keep this story up please!!

Dear Author,
I am not one to reveiw stories unless I find myself wild with anticapation of what might happen next. I hope that you will write more soon. I love this story more than any other fanfiction on Les mis. You have a great talent so don't leave it to the cold. I read some of the other reveiws and see many other people are wanting to see what happens next. So happy writeing.
Kind regards
Hailey

i will admit to being new to les mis fiction, and i must say that this is an interesting pairing, but so far i definitely like it. i really hope to read more of this and i look forward to an update.

OH!! I want to read more! TwT I really hated Javert, but this makes him much nicer! I have a whole new appreciation for him...please write more!

I like this story, please continue! XD

"His cane turned in his hand as he began to walk the streets towards a place of solace: the bridge over the Sein. The water calmed his nerves."

AND THEN! He flings himself into the river and drowns! Wait...no? Oh dear. Well that would completely end the story, wouldn't it? :P

A charming start, I look forward to more!

I like it, it's an interesting idea to put Cosette and Javert together but i think if anyone can help him get things in perspective and be a bit more human than she can. I hope you will update soon.

is this like a lead-in to javerts suicide? cause that would be sucky, even if thats a cool song. one of the few i know. :) hope theres more coming!

I would sign in, but to be entirely honest, it isn't worth my time just to review this... ah... what do you call it - inaccurate little piece. AmZ is right - if you want to write fanfiction, you have to do your homework. There are a lot of major flaws in this, but I believe they've mostly been covered.

Also, you spelt "Seine" wrong at the end. I'm not sure if this was just a typo, but I am a stickler and can't stand to see words spelt wrong. ><

Anywho, love and kisses!

~ Annabel the Scribe

It's pretty obvious that you haven't read the book - you've just heard the musical. For instance, Cosette's name is not really Cosette - it's Euphrasie Fauchelevent. 'Cosette' is a pet name. Introducing herself to a policeman as 'Cosette' would be not unlike introducing herself as 'Honeybunnykins'. Javert has nothing to do with the French Army; he's part of the municipal police. And your Javert is a Jesus freak, when in the book he never spared a thought for the Lord - that was in fact one of Hugo's reproaches of him as a person.

I'm not saying you should move this to the "Musicals" section - god knows lots of musical fic end up here, so why not yours too. But do at least make an effort at understanding what you're writing about.

One other thing, and this is completely unpardonable - fine, base your characters on whatever interpretation you please, but they still *speak* as though they were on stage! "Mademoiselle Cosette, much weighs heavy on my mind. I must walk, and will be back as soon as I am able...my world has been torn asunder." Compare that with how the real Javert spoke in the book: "I have plenty of time," said the inspector, "but no more than enough. Don't forget anything that I have said to you. Bang. A pistol shot."

Make an effort to actually get to know the characters you're writing. Don't just go by what's been regurgitated to you by pop-culture.

Eh. I just read this, but I have to tell you that there are a few things that are off. Either you are writing a musical!Javert or you are unaware of Javert's lack of an organized religion. A little problem is the absurdly speedy pacing. Why not drag this out and make it feel real instead of a 30 min. episode on TV? Like one chapter on the barricade, one on Cosette's feeling at the news, ect. I'm also a bit doubtful that Javert would jump enthusiastically at the idea of having to take care of a girl one third his age. Although, I will encourage you to persue this project, because I've always wondered about a Javert/Cosette.