OMG. You are one of the best writers on here! I'm putting you in my favorites for sure. You capture character persona's so well, and it can be very tough to do! But, you deserve way more than two reviews for this story.

Happy Holidays!

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I went to your profile to see if you had any other fics of RikuSora of KH, and you did, as I happily found out.

This one was, though no direct contact between both parties, no less intense and powerful as your other fiction. I've never, and I say so again, seen such a frightening accurate portrayal of a canon character in a fiction. I don't know how you do it. Riku is so - Riku here. I can't say it any differently. This here isn't just a fanfiction, it's the retelling of the story with more honesty to it. This, this has to be what Riku has thought. The Riku in the game, the 'real' Riku, as far as you can call a fictional character 'real' - this isn't any Riku, this is the 'real' Riku. I really don't know how you do it, but I'm glad you do, because it's so, so beautiful. You have the subtle hint for Riku's self-disgust caught quite beautifully, and the unspoken sentiment of what he's actually given away for this one boy - and, you portray this again so perfectly - for this one boy he still feels he doesn't deserve to be around, never mind being his friend. It's as though Sora's Riku's single purpose in life, or at least that Sora gives Riku's life a purpose, and without Sora, it would be empty. It's really beautiful. Your whole writing style is very subtle and yet every word is so amazingly placed! The whole story flows in one go, and you tell Riku's story so well.

I just want to worship this. Sorry if I ranted too much here, but I'm so taken with this piece. All the little details are fitting wonderfully, your knowledge of canon and character's portrayal is stunning, and your writing style just adds to the sum. Thank you for making my heart bleed, in a good way. This two fiction of yours shall be my favourites for ever in the KH fandom. Thank you!

Wow, I see you've done a lot of thinking while playing KH II. And it's needless to say that I loved this oneshot too. Keep up the good work :D